tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post7838149998234457285..comments2023-05-08T10:20:25.096-04:00Comments on Magician's Merger: Chapter 36: Cold BloodedXenophon Hendrixhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-72741973923850025292019-12-13T00:14:58.699-05:002019-12-13T00:14:58.699-05:00Your book is inventive, thoughtful, and has some l...Your book is inventive, thoughtful, and has some laugh out loud dialog. Great work!<br /><br />Honestly, this book is better than a lot of the dreck being published these days. If you have time and inclination, I think you should try and get this published!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-19467100712348923912019-03-04T01:42:31.047-05:002019-03-04T01:42:31.047-05:00This was a really good story Liked it immensely.I...This was a really good story Liked it immensely.I hope you will come up fast with the second part<br /><a href="https://sunvilla.in/write-for-us/" rel="nofollow"> Marriage write for us </a>Akanshahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16544286254936759424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-91062439861891151982011-01-23T06:46:13.627-05:002011-01-23T06:46:13.627-05:00Awesome work, dude. Liked it immensely. I'm tr...Awesome work, dude. Liked it immensely. I'm trying to write too so I just have one question :<br /><br />How did you format the CONTENTS like that?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-38917754886770959262008-12-26T20:25:00.000-05:002008-12-26T20:25:00.000-05:00Thanks. I have way more than a few nits to pick w...Thanks. I have way more than a few nits to pick with the thing, but I learned a lot from writing it.Xenophon Hendrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-75648670229973961702008-12-25T22:40:00.000-05:002008-12-25T22:40:00.000-05:00Discovered this last week. Read most of it in the ...Discovered this last week. Read most of it in the last couple days. Well done. There are nits I could pick, but won't. In general, very nice story. I look forward to the sequel.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02484976284138761437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-78962674999370261352008-11-09T03:09:00.000-05:002008-11-09T03:09:00.000-05:00to last anon, ley lines might not even exist on th...to last anon, ley lines might not even exist on this "node", and im sure that ursus has encontered them already in another "node"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-84370599471896795382008-11-06T05:10:00.000-05:002008-11-06T05:10:00.000-05:00im curious if he will discover about the ley lines...im curious if he will discover about the ley lines (the mystical magical flows through earth :p)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-23673922966947966402008-11-01T19:36:00.000-04:002008-11-01T19:36:00.000-04:00p.s. and as an young wiccan (and more others ..im ...p.s. and as an young wiccan (and more others ..im a bit like Ursus at that point :) ) i find your ideaas really good made and good inspired at the now existing rulez of 'magic' casting :pAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-85249881035493496642008-11-01T19:32:00.000-04:002008-11-01T19:32:00.000-04:00This was a really good story (and i read many thro...This was a really good story (and i read many through years) !!!<BR/><BR/>I hope you will come up fast with the second part :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-63923295269950909842008-10-28T04:31:00.000-04:002008-10-28T04:31:00.000-04:00damn it i meant the "next chapter"/newer post is o...damn it i meant the "next chapter"/newer post is on the left not the right. i am dyslexicAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-45839234027978429102008-10-28T04:27:00.000-04:002008-10-28T04:27:00.000-04:00just as a note, for when you get back to posting b...just as a note, for when you get back to posting because i can tell from these other posts that you have stopped the story, on format. I have read a large amount of web comics and stories (over a hundred) and i really enjoy your story, it is very original. The format of the screen (which you may not have control of) at the bottom has the "next chapter" on the right, which is not unheard of, but is just unusual. consider changeing it.<BR/><BR/>i do not mean this as discouragement, but just as friendly advice. As I said I realy enjoyed the story and hope to god, or bog as you put it, that you continue your work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-90830958001013044082008-09-22T09:46:00.000-04:002008-09-22T09:46:00.000-04:00good read, can't wait for the next installment.good read, can't wait for the next installment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-70754346392263895072008-09-04T21:55:00.000-04:002008-09-04T21:55:00.000-04:00arrg!!! when do we get a new update???arrg!!! when do we get a new update???Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-1733296214670145602008-07-31T21:43:00.000-04:002008-07-31T21:43:00.000-04:00Just finished the story; nice reading. Can't wait ...Just finished the story; nice reading. Can't wait for the sequel.Belial666https://www.blogger.com/profile/02091844146077994927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-72593387394907313882008-07-27T23:47:00.000-04:002008-07-27T23:47:00.000-04:00Um, what he said... you promised us updates! Just ...Um, what he said... you promised us updates! Just if you could drop a line, say what's happening, it really feels like you left us in the middle of the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-19390675199866519122008-07-24T12:04:00.000-04:002008-07-24T12:04:00.000-04:00How much longer do we have to wait before reading ...How much longer do we have to wait before reading more of you're stories? I'm suffering from withdrawal.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-5918521625861487022008-07-12T04:39:00.000-04:002008-07-12T04:39:00.000-04:00Thanks so much for a very compelling read! I very...Thanks so much for a very compelling read! I very much appreciate the logical way you handled the magic, no hocus-pocus. All very good pagan practices. Love the Mother character. Great premise, very original, will look forward to the next installments.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-17562601895024036752008-06-29T04:11:00.000-04:002008-06-29T04:11:00.000-04:00Well, Arthur's mom does take a fiendish glee in te...Well, Arthur's mom does take a fiendish glee in teasing/tormenting him.Xenophon Hendrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-87992892371123884662008-06-28T12:23:00.000-04:002008-06-28T12:23:00.000-04:00Oh goodness. I have no conception of what happens ...Oh goodness. I have no conception of what happens emotionally to a kid who has to kill someone. Almost better left unsaid for now, "cried myself to sleep" is really the best thing.<BR/><BR/>About the pedal car drawing - it may take a bit. I had to do some moving and I'm on a laptop now. The thing about laptops is that trackpads suck for doing mouse art, which means I won't get it completely updated unless/until I get a wireless mouse. You can link to the drawing as it stands right now, and when I finish the improved one I'll post that over.<BR/><BR/>I really like what you've done with this story. The only thing that irks me is that I remember being a lot angrier at my parents when I was that age, in that irrational way. An effect of pubery, I suppose. But it's hard for me to imagine Arthur getting angry at his mom, since she's just that awesome.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-8249687399682148362008-06-24T13:44:00.000-04:002008-06-24T13:44:00.000-04:00I have liked your story immensely. I am happy to ...I have liked your story immensely. I am happy to know there will be more.<BR/><BR/>Working in advance can be great, and give you a cushion when life throws you a curve.<BR/><BR/>I want to know how Arthur takes this latest development, how the band progresses, and how Mary takes to learning magic. Also, will we see Ursus's familiar make an appearance?<BR/><BR/>Thank you for all the excellent work so far.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-61785201682550565682008-06-24T10:09:00.000-04:002008-06-24T10:09:00.000-04:00I've really enjoyed the story so far. Especially t...I've really enjoyed the story so far. Especially the last two chapters were very powerful. I worry about how Arthur's psyche will be impacted by the extreme violence he's just committed, but I guess that will be resolved as the story goes on.<BR/><BR/>My other worry is that I will be deprived of my several-times-weekly fix of Magician's Merger. While I'd be curious as to how the "experiment" works out, I'd really hate to trade regular short chapters for rare longer pieces.<BR/><BR/>As a non-donating (so far) mostly-lurker, I can't make demands, but I hope it will help the community if I voice my preference.Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12472048557599823717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-77919611498002289272008-06-23T23:34:00.000-04:002008-06-23T23:34:00.000-04:00I've really enjoyed this book, Xenophon. Great jo...I've really enjoyed this book, Xenophon. Great job. I'm looking forward to book 2!Allan T Michaelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02293093156397387385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-9880828202944960872008-06-23T19:53:00.000-04:002008-06-23T19:53:00.000-04:00Thank you, Rob.Thank you, Katie. Since I'm not su...Thank you, Rob.<BR/><BR/>Thank you, Katie. Since I'm not sure what Eve is, the answer is probably "no."<BR/><BR/>Thank you, Rabababa.Xenophon Hendrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-82020639400696690672008-06-23T14:25:00.000-04:002008-06-23T14:25:00.000-04:00Thank you for writing. I'm glad there will be a Bo...Thank you for writing. I'm glad there will be a Book 2. I'd hate to leave this great bunch of characters with nothing more to look forward to. Take your time, but please don't give up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-27662307651781688192008-06-23T09:13:00.000-04:002008-06-23T09:13:00.000-04:00Poor Arthur. :(Xenophon (do you play Eve?), much a...Poor Arthur. :(<BR/>Xenophon (do you play Eve?), much as I want to say moar, moooooooooooar! MORE! I also want you to be comfortable writing and posting and such, so take your time with volume two. I'll be back to read it. :) AWESOME story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com