tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post6809106508626552858..comments2023-05-08T10:20:25.096-04:00Comments on Magician's Merger: Chapter 2: Ursus SurvivesXenophon Hendrixhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-43472049854022603772009-02-07T22:04:00.000-05:002009-02-07T22:04:00.000-05:00"Loosen up. Your hurting us." should be: "Loosen u..."Loosen up. Your hurting us." should be: "Loosen up. You're hurting us."<BR/><BR/>I like the rewrite. I also liked the original.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-45666779098830365922009-02-07T21:06:00.000-05:002009-02-07T21:06:00.000-05:00I made a rough sketch.I made a rough sketch.Xenophon Hendrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1038921089824676189.post-68541416421379489722009-02-06T16:58:00.000-05:002009-02-06T16:58:00.000-05:00great job outlining the house's size and room plac...great job outlining the house's size and room placement...i would bet that you have a map or something drawn upAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com